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Re: Desertion, Existence, Beginnings, and Redemption
Desertion I run through the depraved darkness that the bastard night cast upon the world. I try to escape the treason… the lies that I told in the disheartened truth ...
Sep 2, 2010 -
Re: Peace
I like it.
Jan 17, 2010 -
Re: Listen to the guitar
i love it and it goes together perfectly
Jan 17, 2010 -
Re: Battle
I love it I think its perfect . I love this line "so cock your guns and clean your barrels. Fire and ice can’t exist together,"
Dec 10, 2009 -
Re: Black Book
I like it alot
Dec 9, 2009 -
Re: What is this feeling?
What is this feeling? It is becoming unbearable It is lurking Inside of me, turning dreadful It is the dark It is my heart It is tearing me apart I ...
Dec 8, 2009 -
Re: tis the night of Halloween.
Awesome i love it
Dec 6, 2009 -
Re: Hiding The Cracks
Its a beautiful poem I love this lines "She carefully puts on her makeup, and thinks of the lies she'll say. Im fine thank you, echos in her mind," You ...
Dec 6, 2009 -
Re: One Mistake
One mistake That's all it takes My world turns upside down As I fall to the ground I did not do those things Yet you accuse me falsely You are ...
Dec 5, 2009 -
Re: Lost
Wow, its amazing I love it. I don't see anything you need to change. It's awesome!
Dec 5, 2009 -
Re: Halt Assassin! (meh artwork ^_^)
I think they are pretty good. I like them.
Nov 29, 2009 -
Re: Illisions of Control
The illusions I see here before me Break my heart and soul Even it's beauty is deadly Making my world unwhole Turning my world cloudy Into a pit less hellhole ...
Nov 29, 2009 -
Re: The Love of Him
This poems great I love this part the best, Oh, how I long for your never ending warmth. Your arms encircling my cold, aching body.
Nov 29, 2009 -
Re: Let It Go
I really love this its very beautiful.
Nov 29, 2009 -
Re: My Weakness
I tip the bottle to my lips I stare at the picture on the bed I say I will only take a couple sips Its like they shot my veins ...
Nov 27, 2009
